My conclusion about the pond water

Here is the sample conclusion about the pond water that I shared in class today.

I don't think the pond water is harmful because most of the organisms we found in the water were harmless. Many of the organisms such as the gastrostrich, the water flea, the algae, an the paramecium were all harmless. We found that the water flea is eaten by fish, so if it isn't harmful to them, then it probably isn't harmful to us humans either. The algae just shows that the water is dirty, but doesn't have any harm to students. We aren't positive that a gastrostrich is harmless, bet we assume they aren't because nothing was mentioned on the websites we checked about it being harmful. In conclusion, we don't think the pond water is harmful or that it would make anyone sick.